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I am a fallen lamb,
Broken by this cruel world,
Fallen astray from the cool green path.
My soul, only darkness,
My heart, naught but despair,
Such pain, I'm wounded and forsaken.
I cry, none can save me,
For I am too far gone.
With what I have done who would love me?
Tripping through the darkness,
The cool stream calls to me,
But foul is its taste, I wander more.
Nothing is as it seemed to be,
Nothing offers peace to me.
I long for warmth, security, love,
But nothing can be found
In this dark fallen land.
Nothing lasts, my tears fall bitterly.
But wait! In the silence
I hear His worried call.
The Shepherd calling for his lost flocks.
Had I forgotten?
Given up all sweet hope?
He came, searching the dark land for me.
His warm eyes comfort me,
And joyful is my step.
But then I look upon myself and cringe.
Tainted is my once-fair wool.
I can't be seen by Him!
For then He shall see what I have done.
I lose hope once again,
For I am unworthy.
But He takes me in His arms and laughs.
His face is shining bright.
I'm whiter than the winter's snow.
My voice cries, "holy, holy, holy!"
Cruel pain has no name, now.
I follow behind Him,
I leave the dark land with my Savior.
Warmth, love, security,
All these I have with Thee.
I need naught, following close behind.
His light wards off darkness.
Overwhelmed, I am loved.
My tears, they fall sweet, and I follow.
©2008-2009 =singing-hallelujah
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Well, apparently I wrote this at least two years or so ago.... and didn't like it..... and it got buried under stuff in my room.
But I found it today, and I'm giving it another chance. I like it.
So here you go.
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Strangely enough, I have written a poem very similar to this one. I know how it feels to be in the dark. You portrayed it well. I like this piece a lot and think you did a good job on it!

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“A word of advice from one Reaper to another,” Kyniel took a defensive stance, “never let your ego get the best of you.”
The Realm Within
Oh, is it in your gallery?
Thank you so much!

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Set my heart on fire.
I'll take you in right through the wires.
So you can make it back inside.
I'll take you in right through the wires.

Is this some kind of fantasy, or something that's real to me?
Unfortunately it isn't. I took down all my poetry because I didn't want anyone stealing them. Paranoid I guess but I did anyways.

And you're welcome. It's nice to see such good poetry ^_^

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“A word of advice from one Reaper to another,” Kyniel took a defensive stance, “never let your ego get the best of you.”
The Realm Within
Wow, that is fabulous! I'm really bad at poetry, so I really admire people who can write it very well! :D

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~Steph~
Pirate...

HERO--We Bleed Green And White

I am Steph Sparrow the Gunner of the Bird of Hermes!
Wow, thank you :D

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Set my heart on fire.
I'll take you in right through the wires.
So you can make it back inside.
I'll take you in right through the wires.

Is this some kind of fantasy, or something that's real to me?
I don't like it
I LOVE IT!!
you are a very talented at poetry!

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"With Great Chocolate, comes Great Responsibility"
--Larryboy ^-^
If ur wondering what A&A means, il tell u. Abstract and Awesome!!!
check out [link] and [link]
-M>E
Thank you! :giggle:

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Set my heart on fire.
I'll take you in right through the wires.
So you can make it back inside.
I'll take you in right through the wires.

Is this some kind of fantasy, or something that's real to me?
Yw Meg or should i say Mudkips?? :lmao:

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"With Great Chocolate, comes Great Responsibility"
--Larryboy ^-^
If ur wondering what A&A means, il tell u. Abstract and Awesome!!!
check out [link] and [link]
-M>E
Haha, yourself!
dA has an interesting sense of humor...

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Set my heart on fire.
I'll take you in right through the wires.
So you can make it back inside.
I'll take you in right through the wires.

Is this some kind of fantasy, or something that's real to me?

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